Skin Care Ad

Some things I would do to make this ad more effective:

First, The headline is boring and wouldn’t grab the attention of a prospect.

“Silky smooth skin in less than 30 minutes.”

Second, the creative doesn’t really show anything of value. A video showing a customer coming in with less than ideal skin, the treatment in action, then the end result would be perfect

Target age was set to 35-55+

25-55 makes much more sense.

There are tons of women who start going to Medspas as soon as they start seeing their first lines and blemishes.