Landscaping Ad

This ad is showcasing recent landscaping work completed in Wortley.

While the work itself may be excellent, the ad is falling short with its headline, “Job we completed In Wortley.”

This headline lacks the punch needed to grab the attention of a prospect to get them curious enough to click.

So I changed it to “Do you want to increase the curb appeal of your property in Wortley?”

We need to get people to stop scrolling and pay attention to what we have to say.

The headline is the most crucial part of any ad.

It’s the difference between an amazing result or a total stinker.