Carpentry Ad

This is a prefect product: Custom Furniture

However, the headline needs work.

We are trying to tell people what we can do for them. We have something that’s specialized, exactly the way you want it.

We went with, “Get a custom wardrobe for your home.”

We also made a different offer, “Custom furniture delivered on time. Or we pay you [Dollar Amount].” …Call us today for your carpentry needs.

The first sentence is very important. If the headline doesn’t grab the attention of the reader, it doesn’t matter how good your product is, they won’t read the rest of the ad.