Wardrobe Remodeling Ad
This ad needed a little cleaning up, but in general, this is an okay ad.
First, I changed the headline to “Do you want fitted wardrobes?” to “Do you want to expand your home’s storage space?”
Most homeowners have an idea of what you mean by “fitted wardrobes” and there’s nothing inherently wrong with saying “Do you want a fitted wardrobe?” But it’s a bit bland.
We also changed the creative to a before and after. Beginning with the old closet, showing workers working, then the finished product.