Home Cleaning Service

This Ad has a lot of good aspects, but needs a little cleaning up.

First, retired people have nothing but time on their hands. Personally, each old couple’s home i’ve been in has been completely spotless.

So I wouldn’t say “Are you retired…”

I’d write, “We Clean Homes in [blank] Area Professionally And Affordably”

It’s a cleaning service, they wouldn’t be doing something special for older folk than for anyone else.

Also the picture is a little… odd.

It’s a home cleaning ad, not a CDC disease control cleaning.

A regular cleaning person would do just fine.